On commence toujours par faire trois dessins, que Elizabeth critique
Ensuite on en choisit normalement un, ce mois j'en ai pris deux que l'on esquisse avec les tissus sans les finir et après la deuxième critique on les finit par toujours avec un 100% Ok mais :))). Dans le cas de la cabane, il m' a été suggéré de faire plutôt une forme abstraite, j'ai donc deux versions finales.
Et voici la critique finale
they're all very interesting especially I think the last one because it's such a puzzle!! the shapes are curious...are these shells by the ocean, or rocks...or or ...I do like that mystery. The composition is well balance and very satisfying.
The top one is lovely with the arch of the bushes and the distant sky...I still think there is a little problem with the distant mountain viewed through the arch tending to advance too much..possibly some green branches overlapping it slightly would help to push it back?
And the middle one might be a bit more effective with less sky - but I really like the simplicity of it and the well balanced and contrasting shapes.
Well done 3 pieces...amazing....
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